Two Italian Sestets..................Challenge
Clay of LifeTHROW on the clay and watch it spinUnderstand life is just like that clayYou shape your life you must realiseYou shape it see the form beginHow you must treat each single dayTreat it as...
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Love them both. However, in Clay, you use "shape" twice in a row. How about using sculpt once, instead? Just a thought. Sharing Lives is beautiful. Just brimming with love. No wonder I like it so much.
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With clay I kept that format as deliberate actions, otherwise I would have still used the same word, but altered the line to read You shape your life you must realiseAnd as you shape see the form...
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Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...I can see your point. However, I think I like your suggested change better.
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Hello Teagan, liked the images and the idea of clay...what about: And as you shape, the form begins?? nice iambs then, but you might not want that? I just liked the rhythm...
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